And I believe that its moving ahead in life that causes the flower called Love to bloom
First, thanks for joining the community. There's a lot to like in this, with it being so simple, but so well done.
Nicely done -
Great job with the emotions you worked into such a small piece. Welcome to 3WW!
I believe we need to keep on sailing in this journey, love is just a phase, there's more to it other than what we right now know. :)Few words, beautiful meaning....Regards,
@all: THANKS =)
Yes, life has to wait.. it always has to.. and it does in the end.. well said..and well written..too
thanks Deborah =)no Ramesh Sir i dont agree. i don't agree with the fact that my life has to wait for love to ripen ill ripe along with it, flow with it...thanks again.
.. loved it...superbly dne..
I read your poem then read the comments. Then I returned to the poem and it reads on second reading just like a soul waiting to be born and would have been had she hurried, but now she has to wait for the opportunity to come into being, has to wait for a love to ripen here and make room for her. That's a little unsettling.
Been there, done that..baton of time
Slow and steady to mature or you could stumble and trip..Nice words for the prompt.
thanks for all the comments. it is very encouraging.