23 Sep 2010

entry for 3WW CCVII

He nudged me, called out my name.
I think I should have hastened my gait;
For He says now, love needs to ripen and until then, life needs to wait.  


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my first entry for THIS website

14 comments:

  1. And I believe that its moving ahead in life that causes the flower called Love to bloom

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  2. First, thanks for joining the community. There's a lot to like in this, with it being so simple, but so well done.

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  3. Great job with the emotions you worked into such a small piece. Welcome to 3WW!

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  4. I believe we need to keep on sailing in this journey, love is just a phase, there's more to it other than what we right now know. :)

    Few words, beautiful meaning....
    Regards,

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  5. Yes, life has to wait.. it always has to.. and it does in the end.. well said..and well written..too

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  6. thanks Deborah =)

    no Ramesh Sir i dont agree. i don't agree with the fact that my life has to wait for love to ripen ill ripe along with it, flow with it...
    thanks again.

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  7. .. loved it...superbly dne..

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  8. I read your poem then read the comments. Then I returned to the poem and it reads on second reading just like a soul waiting to be born and would have been had she hurried, but now she has to wait for the opportunity to come into being, has to wait for a love to ripen here and make room for her. That's a little unsettling.

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  9. Slow and steady to mature or you could stumble and trip..Nice words for the prompt.

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  10. thanks for all the comments. it is very encouraging.

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