kal tha phir ek khwab dekha...
aaya hai tera paigaam dekha.
aankehn khuli to na tu, na koi khat...
labon ke tale ek bas ek nishaan dekha.
ek khidki khuli si,
dheemi khushbhu, baarish ki booden;
akele se aaine me tera aks dekha,
phir tha kal ek kwab dekha...
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this is powerful, it brings together a smile with tears..thanks Vagabond for writing this.. ur words bring alive the dead emotions in me..
ReplyDeletethe pleasure is all mine =)
ReplyDeletetake care...
Beautiful lines...
ReplyDeleteSuch depth n clarity...I am anyways a sucker for good Hindi poetry and when it comes from someone as young as you...leaves one even more wondering n spellbound:-)
Love the line... “akele se aaine me tera aks dekha....”
:-)
thnks! =D
ReplyDeletebaap re.. aapne kitna kuch dhekha...
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yo kno wat... after a long time i ve read such a beautiful hindi poetry... just loved it...
ReplyDeletethanks a ton =)
ReplyDeletei loved this one too...
After gettin Specs Tum Bahut kuch Dekh rahi ho :P
ReplyDeleteVery nice :)