rains.

could there be hope?
could there be light?
could there be anything that is bright?

life has just ceased to be,
and here,sets this melancholy
god sent rhe rain
what good did it serve
when misty eyes saw it all before
it drained away all that was left
for me to clench on hug and pair.
the clouds made it all grey

grey grey was all around.

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  1. when misty eyes saw it all before..very poignant!!!

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  2. this is realy great ........
    u r realy good in this.......

    DEVASHISH
    (david.iitkgp@indiatimes.com)

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  3. "god sent the rain
    what good did it serve
    when misty eyes saw it all before"...my personal favorite ,line.

    There is great depth in this line..
    A suggestion-You should have or could have written more instead of ending it so soon.

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  4. 'Well I've been here before,
    Sat on a floor in a grey grey mood.
    Where I stay up all night,
    And all that I write is a grey grey tune'

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