ek shakl hai jo aankhon se hat ti nahin.
ek ehsaas jo adhoora hokar bhi pura hai.
ek khamosh main hun. 
ek khamosh se tum.

khamosh tum me, main apna geet dhundhti.
khamosh khud me, tumhara aks. 

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  1. this is beautiful. jab uska aks mil jaaye toh usse jaane mat dena. hold on to him

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  2. thanks and i would love that. =)

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  3. very nice poetic blog...most enjoyed

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  4. wondeful words, but one small suggestion

    make lines rhyme ,it will sound more beautiful

    khamosh tum me, main apna geet dhundhti.
    khamosh khud me, tumhara aks khojti

    :)

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  5. woh khamoshi hi tho aks hai!!

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  6. @lyrically speaking: thnks =)

    @mr.happy: thnks for appreciating. but i like that little imperfection here =)

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  7. @krish: =) astute observation as always!!
    you always find answers for me in my questions...

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