8 Jun 2010

ek shakl hai jo aankhon se hat ti nahin.
ek ehsaas jo adhoora hokar bhi pura hai.
ek khamosh main hun. 
ek khamosh se tum.

khamosh tum me, main apna geet dhundhti.
khamosh khud me, tumhara aks. 

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7 comments:

  1. Lucifer8 June 2010 at 18:13

    this is beautiful. jab uska aks mil jaaye toh usse jaane mat dena. hold on to him

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  2. Vagabond8 June 2010 at 18:50

    thanks and i would love that. =)

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  3. Lyrically speaking9 June 2010 at 08:56

    very nice poetic blog...most enjoyed

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  4. Mr Happy9 June 2010 at 12:30

    wondeful words, but one small suggestion

    make lines rhyme ,it will sound more beautiful

    khamosh tum me, main apna geet dhundhti.
    khamosh khud me, tumhara aks khojti

    :)

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  5. Anonymous9 June 2010 at 21:45

    woh khamoshi hi tho aks hai!!

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  6. Vagabond9 June 2010 at 21:54

    @lyrically speaking: thnks =)

    @mr.happy: thnks for appreciating. but i like that little imperfection here =)

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  7. Vagabond9 June 2010 at 21:55

    @krish: =) astute observation as always!!
    you always find answers for me in my questions...

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